13: Suspense unfolded
Cut back:
After
Meera called up her parents to tell them the good news about her marriage, she
left to the airport. She got the boarding
pass but came out. She realized that she had not given him the gift she had
bought for him. She smiled to herself a million times as she headed to the
hospital. She reached the hospital and ran to his room.
“I need to meet Ashruth right
now.” She said to the receptionist.
“But mam, doctor asked me not to
send anyone in. He asked me not to call him too. He is in an important meeting
mam.” Receptionist restricted him from entering the room.She waited for five minutes.
“Mam, can you please see to that
no one enters for 5 minutes. I need to go to loo.” The receptionist asked and
left the place.
Meera was not
able to wait anymore; she wanted to get inside immediately. She wanted to give
him the gift that almost took 1 week of her time. She was excited to know how
he reacted. Meeting did not seem so big to her. She opened the door and was
shocked. She saw him with another girl. They were very intimate. He was about
to kiss her and Meera had interrupted. He did not expect Meera there.
Meera cried
and took out her mobile. Ashruth snatched it, switched it off and threw it
away. Meera broke into tears. The other woman there held Meera’s hands and Meera
was not able to free herself from the grip of the woman. Ashruth gave her an
evil grin and said
“Yes, it was your money that I
wanted. Now what?” Ashruth said.
“What are we going to do now Ashi?”, Ashruth’s illegal affair asked.
“We will think about it.” Ashruth’s
phone bell rang. It was the news about the fire accident at the airport. The
victims were sent to his hospital and he had to rush to attend them. He gave
Meera Chloroform and hid her in the dump room. He locked the room and came out.
The receptionist had forgotten about Meera in the chaos. The victims were
shifted to the hospital and Ashruth attended a few.
There
she was Deepthi. Deepthi had a burn in her face and arm. Ashruth was attending
Deepthi. His phone rang, it was Santhosh. He did not know what to say. Meera
did not board the flight that met with an accident. But if he told that he will
have to send Meera back home. Meera, now, knows the real him. He didn’t want to
send her back. But if he says that she died in the accident he wouldn’t be able
to rob their property in the name of marriage. He gave it a thought and
attended the call. When Nadhiya asked him about the fire accident he lied to
Santhosh saying that Meera was with him. He also said she had a burn in her arm
and face. That was from the case he was attending, Deepthi. Deepthi gained consciousness
and he found out that she was hit in her head. Deepthi had forgotten the past; amnesia.
An idea hit his head. He ran to the room and called his affair there. They both
managed to suffocate Meera to death with a pillow. Then he burnt her face.
Since he was the doctor he replaced Deepthi with Meera’s corpse and declared
Deepthi’s death. Since the fire accident happened even before people boarded
the flight, way before the take off, Meera coming back without taking the
flight didn’t matter.
So
officially Deepthi was dead. Her corpse was sent to the mortuary. He brought
Deepthi to his room. He took advantage over the self-forgotten state of
Deepthi. He told Santhosh that Meera was suffering from amnesia and convinced them
that he would take care. He also told them that she had burns all over her face
and arm. He also told them that he was going to give her a plastic surgery. He
did that to Deepthi. He morphed her into Meera with the help of the plastic
surgery. Deepthi had forgotten the past and now she looks like Meera. She was a
white paper and he could write anything into it; he wrote Meera in it.
“What if Deepthi gets back her
lost memories?” Ashruth’s illegal affair asked.
“By the time she gets back her memory;
people will sculpt her into Meera. Even her appearance will be against her
memory. She will be scared to tell it
out. She won’t be able to picturize her own face ever. She will kill her old memories
herself. I will also tell people there that such things might happen.”
“Wow! You are a genius.” The illegal
hugged him and kissed him.
“Yes baby. I am a genius. I will
marry her soon. In this state, her bloody parents will be scared if I’ll change
my mind. Those idiots don’t even know the way we tried to make her fall for me.
Thank god I found her diary. Thank god you gave me such a nice plan,
instantaneously. A woman knows a woman’s
heart. How true.” Ashruth said.
“I love you baby. Marry her soon.
Rob them soon. Let’s fly to London and live our dream life.” She again kissed
him.
Paste Front:
Ashruth told
Santhosh everything that happened. Ashruth was helpless. Santhosh made a quick
plan. He took a syringe and pulled the knob of it. He filled it with air and
injected into Ashruth’s veins. He had seen this way of killing in a Tamil
Movie, Nepali. He came out like he
did nothing. He smiled at the receptionist and went back with Meera (Deepthi).
He told Meera (Deepthi) what had happened.
“Deepthi, please,
can you act as Meera for few more days? Please. My uncle can’t digest that
Meera is dead. Please do this for me Mee..sorry Deepthi.” Santhosh begged.
“Meera, call
me Meera. The name has given me a beautiful family. I won’t miss them.”
Santhosh passed on the pen drives
he had collected from Ashruth’s place to commissioner. He knew Ashruth’s dead
was not going to be a big problem to him. He was ready to face anything,
though.
“I missed meeting Deb, anyway. I
will surely meet him in his next book release. We will definitely propose each other
just like in my book, in an author signing. But the only change is, it will be
his, not mine.” She said and smiled after ages.
Santhosh knew she was talking
about him, but he did not want to change her dream of their life starting in an
author signing program.
There is one more chapter to end the series. Will Santhosh and Meera (Deepthi) marry? Where and how will they propose. JUST ONE MORE TO GO.
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