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The sun rises up in the sky, lighting up
Shekhar’s study.
As the heat bears down, warming him to his bones and as daylight displaces the darkness, Shekhar wakes up
to a new day. He decides to stay put
with his head resting over his folded arms, at his writing table in front of the window and watch the world go by. The leaves on the trees are a shiny bright
green.
‘It’s a pleasant morning’, he says to
himself, quite oblivious to how the day is going to pan out for him.
He walks out of the room to find his
wife, Tara, busily running around. She moves from kitchen to bedroom and back
to kitchen as if on wheels, battling against time to get food ready and wake
her nine year old daughter Roohi up.
Shekhar walks into the kitchen and makes
tea for himself in an unobtrusive manner. As he walks out of the kitchen, he
wishes her good morning.
‘Good morning’ she says gritting her
teeth.
‘This man can never be helpful. He lives
in a cocoon, writing all the time’ she says to
herself as she packs lunch for herself and Roohi. She walks back into the
bedroom.
‘Roohi, will you get up, now? Don’t
trouble me the way your father does. Please be
of some help’!
‘Roohi, please!’ she yells.
Roohi gets up and walks straight into the
bathroom without a word. She generally avoids talking too much at least at home
these days.
‘Roohi, did you get the report card for
your quarterly exams, yet?’ Tara asks, slamming the bathroom door from outside.
After a minute of silence, Roohi
reluctantly replies ‘Yes mom.’
‘You are just like your dad.’ She reaches
for Roohi’s school bag and pulls out the report card from Roohi’s
bag. She turns to the last page that’s filled. She does not even bother to look
at the marks. She walks out of the room and slams it on the table, near Shekar.
‘Sign it! she says and walks into their
master bedroom.
Shekhar continues to read page 2 of the
Hindu, pretending he has not heard what she just said.
Tara yells from the bedroom as she hears
Roohi’s bathroom door opening. ‘Milk is
on the dining table. Drink it!’
Roohi drags herself slowly to the dining
table and silently drinks the milk which is now cold. On her way back to her room to get ready, she
walks up to her dad.
‘Dad, please sign this’ she almost
whispers.
Shekhar peers at her from the top of his
thin glasses, thinks for a moment and places the paper on his lap. He picks up
the report card and looks at it for a moment scratching his French beard.
‘Sorry dad. I will score better next
time’ Roohi says as fear shrouds her face.
‘Where do I sign?’ he asks , still
searching and tapping his bald head.
‘Here dad’ she says very helpfully,
looking pointedly at the report card.
‘Okay’ he mutters, picking up a pen from
the pen holder, signs it and throws it back on the table. He picks up the
newspaper to shield his face from Roohi. Roohi gathers her report card and
leaves the study.
An hour passes by. Roohi comes out of the
bedroom, neatly dressed in her uniform. Tara joins her in a minute, with her
face plastered in makeup and lips painted a dark shade of red. She looks into
the mirror in the hall, to make sure that her shoulder length hair is in order.
She quickly steps into her high heel slippers and slings her handbag over her
shoulder. The two bid goodbye to Shekhar, who still has his nose buried in the
morning newspaper. Not willing to take his eyes off the newspaper, he mouths an
indifferent goodbye the moment after they leave, shutting the door behind.
As Shekhar turns to page 4 of paper, a
smile plays on his lips. His article has been published.
He has always fancied his name printed in
the newspapers. He works for ‘The Hindu’ as a freelance writer. Half way
through the article, his phone rings. The screen flashes a number that the
contact list of his phone doesn’t recognize.
‘Hello!’ he exclaims surprised. .
‘This is Jenny’, a female voice replies.
Jennifer and Shekhar have been friends since
the time Shekar started his career as a freelance writer. Shekhar was an
ex-reporter of Times of India, Kochi, where Jennifer works as a photographer.
The two travelled a lot together for various stories. Later, after Shekar got
married to Tara, he shifted to Mumbai and got associated with Hindu as a
freelancer.
‘Hello Jen. What’s up?’ asks Shekhar with
excitement brimming his voice.
‘Shek, I accidentally clicked a
sensational photograph. Now...’ she pauses and takes a deep breath. She
continues after a second ‘I am running.’ She pauses again, breathing heavily.
‘They are ...’ Shekhar hears the noise of the phone being fiddled. ‘They are
chasing me. I am scared. I need to hide before the photograph is published. I
fear for my life. They might even...’ she pauses.
‘Come here Jen. You can stay at my place’
he blurts out the words almost instantaneously, without thinking.
‘Okay. I will come there somehow. I have
removed my SIM so that they don’t trace me with it. I don’t have a number now.
I will somehow reach there’ she says.
‘What’s the photograph about?’ he asks.
‘Shek, those guys are here. I got to go. Expect me tomorrow morning.
Bye.’ She says it in a hurry and dismisses the call.
‘Jennifer is in serious trouble. I hope
nothing happens to her’ he says to himself, looking up at the ceiling as though
he is talking to God.
The genuine concern for his friend ruins
his day. He places the coffee cup on the tea table and stretches out, his leg
over the table. He rests his head back on his interlaced fingers and gets lost
in thoughts. Jennifer has always been his only source of motivation. Even when
his wife did not understand his struggle to become a successful writer,
Jennifer was with him. He always dreamed of writing a book, a bestseller. He
works all day and all night to write interesting stories, only to receive rejection
mails from the top publishers. He isn’t ready to compromise on the publishers.
He has a list of the top ones and doesn’t want to publish a book just for the
sake of it. He lives in a shell from which even his daughter Roohi is excluded.
His study is his world. Whenever he has a story in
mind, he calls Jennifer to discuss it.
Jennifer isn’t married, yet.
He sits immobile all day, his thoughts
harking back to his days with Jenni. The thought that Jennifer is in deep
trouble and he is helpless, sitting at home, pains him. His hopes to see her
the next day.
Roohi comes back home and heads directly
to her room. Shekhar sits in his couch, undisturbed. Tara comes home and gets
annoyed at seeing the tea cup right where it was in the morning. She gets
irritated seeingthe lunch lying uneaten in the kitchen. Nothing disturbs
Shekhar. He is deeply worried about the trouble Jennifer has got herself into.
Tara has never seen Shekhar so worried and rooted to a spot all day; not even
when his manuscript was plagiarised. She decides to save the questions for the
next day as the work has left her quite tired today.
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Excellent start to the series, GB. Mine will be up shortly. Cheers :)
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Great start, Ganga. Happy to be part of the Dynamic WordWeavers.
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Nice one Ganga.... Good start:)
ReplyDeleteWonderful beginning to this series GB... Glad to be a part of this series and continue this baton of writing ahead....
ReplyDeleteInteresting beginning. Eager to read the second chapter. :)
ReplyDeleteInteresting start Ganga...liked your dialogues. Thanks for visiting my blog :)
ReplyDeleteVery good flow - started as a family drama and ended with an interesting twist
ReplyDeleteVery interesting start with a twist about jeni
ReplyDeleteGanga, a reader has posted a comment to your chapter on my blog. I am copy-pasting the comment here.
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CHAPTER 1
The story lines create a 3D effect of a family unit to start with. It is so graphic in highlighting typically what goes on within a family 24x7. There is a beautiful portrayal of the lack of appreciation of the interests and focus of each constituent of the family evident in the way the father’s poor allocation of his time resources to his wife and child, the wife ignoring the area of interest of her husband and the child growing up with denials of sorts. It is a tragedy that a neglect of attention and appreciation irrespective of its justifications is sponsoring the husband drifting to a different territory where he is better received. The hope is, the story progression will dwelve into dealing with approaches that will turn the tide for the better and land a message emphasizing harmony in family life".
- Sridhar
Very good and interesting start!
ReplyDeleteThe story started picking up pace slowly...now I am really waiting to read the next part.Gr8 Going!!!
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